Third full draft

 
Audience feedback:
From audience feedback I have been given several pointers about how to visually enhance the video and make for a smoother more appealing transition between shots. The first point made was that the beginning of the video has several jump cuts with the beat of the music. However, there is several beats that are missed with a long duration shot that has been overlayed with several interchanging shots. It was also picked up on that the spinning pole shot at 1:13 was accidentally shot in portrait rather than landscape which makes the shot appear on its side. It was also mentioned that the shots from the hook a duck section of the video at 1:14 are slightly too overlayed and the impact of the colour is taken away. At 2:05 Freya is overlayed but is less viable, it was raised to possible increase the opacity of this shot to make Freya more of a focus in the shot. The general aesthetic of the video is very bright and colorful, however, at 2:33 going down the helta skelta there is a very viable shot of a working mans club that doesn't fit with the rest of the video. Finally at 3:00  Freya gets lost in the flickering as there is too much overlapping.

Taking this into account these changes will be made to fix a final draft of the video.